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Kalas' Writing Exploits
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RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits
Thanks man, I'm glad that you like them and it's good to see that others can relate to the feelings behind the words.

"I'll leave you scared and alone in the darkest part of the last hour,
And laugh darkly as I rip out your heart, whilst you cower."


These two lines were always the ones that struck me the most when I read it over and over. Not just because of the words though, but the constant rhyming in such a short space. As if i'd reached the peak of my anger. It's weird.
(This post was last modified: 15-10-2014 08:41 PM by Kalas.)
15-10-2014 08:41 PM
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Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 15-10-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 15-10-2014, 08:12 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - WeAreNobody - 15-10-2014, 08:27 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 15-10-2014 08:41 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 13-11-2014, 05:00 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - WeAreNobody - 13-11-2014, 06:08 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 13-11-2014, 06:23 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - WeAreNobody - 13-11-2014, 06:26 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 14-11-2014, 11:10 AM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 14-11-2014, 01:33 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - WeAreNobody - 15-11-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Razgriz - 02-12-2014, 06:53 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 02-12-2014, 07:04 PM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 06-12-2014, 01:03 AM
RE: Kalas' Writing Exploits - Kalas - 09-12-2014, 06:31 PM



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